JDubbington
7th Feb 2022, 7:54 PM

I like the layout of this page. It took a quiet conversation and made it more dynamic.

I really dig the perspective swap from forest to seaside, the dense green to wavy blue. Very appealin'.

Storywise I like that David's dry comment cracked Jason up and I hope it leads to a happier moment than last page ;-; Some sweet/positive character interaction. I hope.

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