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Dialogue
David (thinking):
Then that should tell me to cease interest.
I'll pick him I suppose.
The magazines make more sense.
There are no boundaries.
My body gets them.
There isn't a lot to decipher.
Just interchangeable people. Exposed. No privacy.

David (thinking):
So how could art feel... Yet I cannot?

JDubbington
16th Jan 2022, 3:02 PM

Very saucy. I approve.

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Guest
12th Oct 2022, 11:55 AM

I can't remember if I've said this before (it's been a while since I made it back here), but I love how you are able to make this introspection visually appealing and interesting. I think it's hard to keep a lot of dialogue flowing, but it's well paired with the visuals, so holds the reader's interest (or it, I mean, it holds my interest as a reader. Guess I can't speak for everyone XD).

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Cooks
12th Oct 2022, 5:28 PM

i'm glad they work! they can be challenging

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